Dusk of the Madness: OVERTIME Amazing animation, bud! However, I sadly can't give this a 5/5 because of the rushed ending. I can tell you were running out of time and that's completely understandable! Maybe someday we can get a definitive ending, as this one was quite rushed. All in all, still an amazing animation throughout! Good work on this.
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Dleta67 responds:
The funny thing is that one of the reasons Overtime was made was because Dusk's ending was rushed... only for Overtime's ending to also end up rushed. Whoops.
I guess we need Overtime for the Overtime
LittleLuckyLink responds:
Dusk's ending was rushed to the point where I felt the need to create an entirely new episode, but Overtime's ending is thankfully much closer to what I had intended. I don't know if it was as much rushed as it was too quick. We could very well see a slightly re-cut ending with more shots of Gregory's demise, atmospheric stuff, etc. The credits sequence was intended to have several more still-images. I ultimately deemed some of the extra stuff as unimportant and I absolutely cannot deny how itchy I was to finally be done with this.
Stay tuned!
Nipple Tassles I see potential here. I'd suggest if you make more animations regarding humanoid physics of this type, try adding more easing in and out motions, don't be afraid to experiment either. Maybe add a couple frames of the head nodding up and down to add to the smoothing. Overall, there's a few things you could improve, but otherwise it's a simple but enjoyable moving anthropomorphic pin-up, not much else to say.
Omtay responds:
Yeah. It was just a short cheap commission I did a couple years ago. I haven't really animated since then though.
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